Friday, July 13, 2012

Young Writer of the Month: Sarah Grace Carmichael


By Sarah Grace Carmichael
Emma and Sarah

Emma Won’t Go to Bed

Once upon a time there was a baby girl named Emma.

She would never go to bed.

Her mom read her 1,000 books. That didn’t work.

Her mom walked her around the house three times.

That didn’t work.

She scratched Emma’s back for two hours. That didn’t work, either.

She tried everything, but nothing worked.

Then she remembered what always worked.

 She sang a lullaby and it finally worked.

 Then her mom jumped up and down and yelled,

“It worked! It worked!”

She ran around the house three times, then began to fold laundry and watch T.V.

The End

Why did you write this story? 
I want to be an author like my mommy and one night I couldn’t fall asleep and she tried everything to make me sleepy.  I thought it would make a funny story.

Why weren’t you the baby in the story? 
Because I wanted it to be about my big sister, Emma.

Did you do the illustrations for your picture book? 
Yes, I used crayons and markers. For two of the pictures, I forgot to put hair on the mom. The mom in the book has brown hair, but my mom has blonde and white hair.

Can you tell me what kind things the mom in your story does for baby Emma? 
She scratches her back, reads her 1,000 books, carries her around the house and sings to her. She never loses her temper and yells at the baby. That’s what kind mommies do, they talk in sweet voices.

One last question. What does your mommy do after you go to bed? 
She goes downstairs, watches T.V. and folds laundry. Oh! And when I’m asleep, she tiptoes into my room and kisses me on the cheek and whispers “I love you.”
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Sarah Grace Carmichael will be eight on Monday and next year, in grade three at Ecole Crane French Immersion School in Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada. Her favorite activities include: eating candy, playing soccer, and having sleepovers with friends, as well as writing stories!

17 comments:

  1. What an honest story of how the little things we do for each other matter as we treat each other with kindness and loving respect.

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  2. Sarah (the author)July 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM

    what a great story!

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  3. It was a wonderful book!Sarah is a great artist and author! She is a great friend of mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. It was a wonderful story - and now we know about Mom's hair! ;D

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  5. Sweet! What a bright and talented little girl- I bet her Mommy is VERY proud of her!

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  6. Observation #1: Sarah has inherited her Mommy's sense of humor. Observation #2: My favorite line in the post is, "That's what kind mommies do, they talk in sweet voices." Indeed. Bravo, Sarah! ~ Rana, Your Publisher

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  7. Great story, Sarah! I have a collection of books that I wrote when I was younger...always keep them!

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  8. Thanks for that, Sarah! Keep writting!

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  9. Thank you for sharing your story, Sarah. It is really terrific and exactly what Moms do, especially the back scratching and the sweet voice. Keep writing!

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  10. So, Sarah, what is your next story about?

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  11. I'm glad that Baby Emma didn't wake up when her mom yelled about the lullaby working. That's what would have happened to me! Thank you, Sarah. I enjoyed your story. :)

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  12. gabriele goldstoneJuly 13, 2012 at 3:33 PM

    Congratulations, Sarah. You are talented, funny and kind. Just like your mom!

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  13. I'm so proud of you Sarah! Who knew when you asked me to get your wonderful book published, it would happen so quickly! You truly amaze me, my sweetie.
    And HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Now you can say you're first book went online prior to turning 8!
    Love and hugs,
    Mommy

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  14. I liked your story and I thought it was really funny! My favourite part was when baby Emma fell asleep and the Mom jumped up and yelled. Then she ran around the house three times, folded laundry and watched TV.
    P.S. I really like eating candy too!
    From your candy eating friend,
    Lauren H.

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  15. Hi Sarah,
    I think your story is really funny! My favourite part was when Emma's Mom read so many stories to Emma. I really liked your drawing. I think it was funny when you said you forgot to put hair on Emma's Mom! One day I tried to read 1,000 stories before bed, but I fell asleep.
    Your friend,
    Brynne H.

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